Astronomy (and other Space Sciences)
In page 4, Review of Existing Literature
In page 4 you are starting with “Review of Existing Literature” then you have a whole chapter 2 is on Review of Literature but which is not really literature Review. . Your Literature Review should be a short 1-2 pages where you summarize the most important literature you have used in the Thesis. You can bring that to Page 4 in the beginning and instead of calling Review of Existing Literature you can Call it Literature Review and expand it. Your Chapter 2 is a main Chapter and you should call it “History of Exploring and Using the Space”.
In 1.4, page 5, you say “Thesis Scope and Key Terms” but you did not define any Key terms. Since this is a technical Thesis and there are lot of technical terms define some technical terms here (10 to 15)
There were couple of questions raised by Dr. Paul and Dr. Marios that you should address;
How the military will use these satellites?
What treaties are signed or will be signed in future for using these satellites?
What are the future possibilities of the UAE having its own space station?
These minor thins and I am sure you make these corrections and additions soon.
Your paper needs a good editing there are lot or errors and mistakes. Check your paper for grammar and spell checking before submitting.